judging by the song title. Wow your cool.
the beginning kinda throws you off to how good the song is.
clearly all things aside this song is prolly meant to give people the impression that this person doesn't give a shit about this contest
but during the middle it gets really interesting
however it does sound like you ripped off the end credits of super mario RPG when it starts up.
very good song:D
I like this song very much
i can't tell between the chorus and the verse however adn the climax just doesn't seem to happen it just sort of peaks and stops.
the song seems to be constantly a build up to something else but then nothing happens.
otherwise everything else in this song is perfect almost
good chord progression some sour, weak percussion,
the chords and rythyms have good progression but hit a couple of sour notes a few times. I'm not sure if these are flaws in the song or if they are intended
but once the song picks up even though there are still sour notes it is still very good.
also the main theme is very loud and the percussion is very hard to hear or often times inaudible leaving large gaps in the mesh of the song.
Very tense, has a lot of build up
I like this song it sounds like you could do commission with songs like this for movies and video games. Short and sweet and makes you feel like time is moving quicker and things are at the end of the line
makes me think of 2 people fighting in a burnt down church and moving on to the untended weathered graveyard.
not bad needs improvements
no offense man but the first thing i noticed is that u can completely tell this was made with fruity loops lol actually its called fruity studio or somethin but whatever.
not bad for ur first song but it could use some improvements it doesn't sound like a song nothing is holding all these beats u created together. they don't fit. it's like u put the peices in but they don't fit together and fall apart because u didn't use any glue... if that makes any sense but in any case keep on trying
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